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smilebackwards ([personal profile] smilebackwards) wrote2020-07-01 04:41 pm

Sunshine Challenge Day 1 - Red



Combining this with an ask meme I saw on tumblr. Found the word 'red' in my latest WIP and here's a snippet.

“Ouch,” Magnus says, more in shock than pain when the next thing Alec hands him pokes his arm with hard bristles. Alec stands up and takes it from him, telescoping the end out into— “A broom,” Magnus says, skeptically. “You brought me a broom.”

“Yes,” Alec says decisively.

Magnus snorts out a laugh. “Be still my beating heart.”

“You shouldn’t have to live like this,” Alec says earnestly, looking around at all the dark, depressing corners of Magnus’s father’s house. Magnus should really stop calling it that; it’s his house now, for whatever that’s worth.

And that’s how they spend the next few hours sweeping away cobwebs and beating red dust settled centuries deep out of the faded old furniture instead of having sex. At least Alec takes off his shirt, even if he ends up using it for a dust rag.

“This is incredibly sexy,” Magnus teases, but he’s honestly touched. It’s like the odd domestic chores he used to cherish: Alec’s insistence on hand washing their dishes, making breakfast in the mornings with the weak sunlight coming in off the balcony. Alec makes everything around Magnus feel brighter.

Alec grins back. “We’ll use the sheets once they’ve finished airing out.”

“Promises, promises, darling,” Magnus says, but, of course, Alec always keeps his promises.
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[personal profile] autobotscoutriella 2020-07-01 10:19 pm (UTC)(link)
That's a really cool twist on the prompt! I might have to steal that for mine. :D

I don't usually read in Shadowhunters, but this scene is super cute.
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[personal profile] enemytosleep 2020-07-03 01:52 am (UTC)(link)
I don't know the fandom, but I do love what you've managed to do with this scene. The fact that Magnus is living in his father's house, and the fact that it now belongs to him hangs heavy with the complicated feelings of grief and family relations (whether that relationship was healthy or not, the fact that it's ended and Magnus is staying in its shadows means something difficult). The centuries deep dust that's settled into the furniture and what that can mean. The comparatively comfortable relationship Magnus shares with Alec showed in their easy banter and the support Alec shows. This is well done.